Detective Case 4: Flaming Angels
Croonford
Local Police Station
A day later
"Can you
identify the two men in the separate you?" DI Nikki Heath asked Michelle
and Lin Ling.
"Uh…well
it was really dark..." Michelle began, staring through the two-way mirror.
Walter Munro and his son sat apart with their lawyers’ present.
"Maybe if
you could let us hear their voices - I remember a voice when I was
captured," Lin replied.
DI Heath
thought for a minute then open the audio for the last interrogation she had
with the arrested duo; she couldn't let the girls listen to the men due to
legal reasons.
"That's
it! The son was the one who captured me," Lin pointed and Michelle agreed.
"That's
good enough," Nikki said, noting it down on a tablet. "The lawyers
can bark all they want but that should lock them away."
"That
simple?" Chelle asked.
"Well,
there may be bumps down the road but yes," Nikki replied. "Thanks a
lot girls. Have a great weekend."
"So how
was it?" Jenn Thompson asked her two new pals.
"Like way
better than you see on a telly," Chelle remarked.
"Well it
sounds like an adventure, except the parts where get captured, bound
and..."
"Afraid of
that? Don't want to join us as a teen detective?" Lin poked her.
"Oh no,
I'm still game. I love your gadgets like that earring radio."
"But you
don't have earrings. Wait, we can fix that now."
Nearly an hour
later, the girls emerged from a beauty shop with Jenn clutching her new
punctured earlobes and studded earrings. "Quit holding them," Lin
told her. "The more you hold them the more you think it'll hurt."
"Ow,"
Jenn still whined. "So how do I get the radio thingy?"
"I have to
clip it on. That reminds me, I still have pack my science-y stuff. Want to give
me a hand?"
"You
really are a scientist," Jenn remarked much later as the trio packed away
the bits and pieces into boxes and bags in Lin's house. Lin had already clipped
on the radio device on her new earrings. "How did you manage to acquire
all this?"
"Let's
just say I use my pocket money well," Lin replied. "Be careful with
that!" She exclaimed at Chelle. "That's my rangefinder disguised in a
watch."
"Why would
detectives need a rangefinder?" Jenn asked.
"You never
know," Lin replied, carefully packing another device. "Damn, these
bags and boxes may not be enough."
"We need a
space for this and our work, you know, like a headquarters," Michelle
mused.
"You mean
like the Three Investigators, working out of a junkyard?" Jenn added.
"I don't want to be based out of some dingy old shack."
"First we
have to find a place..." Michelle's phone suddenly beeped. "Oh,
great, my dad's returned home. Sorry, got to go."
Summers
Residence
A while later
"Daddy!"
Catherine Summers cried, hugging her father over and over again. In response,
the greying Arthur Summers tickling his youngest daughter; he knew she
loved that.
"Alright,
Kate, want to see what I got you?" Arthur smiled, reaching into one of his
bags. "You love dolls, but this isn't just any doll." Kate unscrewed
the wooden figure, revealing another similar figure inside then was told to
remove that smaller figure, revealing yet another figure.
"It's a
Matryoshka doll," her father slowly pronounced the word as she replaced
the parts back. "And's that's what makes it special." Kate thanked
her father and raced to her room to arrange her new toy on her shelf.
"Dad!"
Chelle hugged her father. Her gift was a batik dress with intricate design.
"I hope it fits, honey."
"I'm sure
it does. Where in Malaysia or Indonesia, Dad?"
"I..."
Art Summers frowned.
"Let you
father shower; he had a long day," Maggie Summers suddenly appeared and
guided her husband away. "Get the table ready children; I've made
dinner."
Why on earth
won't dad tell me where he's off to? Chelle wondered. And what 'work' does he
does he really do?
Croonford
School
The next week
"Dad
bought me this," Chelle showed Lin a picture of the dress as they walked
through the school gates.
"Cool! I
have a batik dress as well. Did he travel to Malaysia?" Lin asked.
"That he's
been coy about. In fact, he's never told me or Kate what exactly he does, some
government work or something."
"He could
be a ..."
"Hey you
two, watch out!" Lin's sentence was cut off with Heather's cry. Both girls
jumped, just in time a pail of dirty sewage splashed near them. Students
managed to move away but classmate Hatty Coy's tights were slight soaked. She
ran to her locker to get a change while the slight laughter from the side
hallway revealed who rigged the bucket.
"Lin, Lin,
don't!" Chelle held back her friend who was ready to charge at the
Jon-Beatles gang members. "We'll save it for another time."
"But
the..."
"It's
fighting fire with fire. I'll try to sort it out."
Lin nodded but
confronted Art Morton in class. "I know nothing about any a sewage
pail," he snorted at her.
"Your eyes
say different. Now get your idiotic gang to stop this bullying," Lin
raised her voice and readied herself to physically fight him if necessary.
"Aw, I
love it when you're angry," Art taunted her. "Why don't..."
"Morning
class," their teacher Mr Lambeth greeted. Both glared at each other, but
silently thankful for the interruption. The week went by with Chelle informing
the discipline teachers about the bullying, yet hardly anything was done.
"Phew,
lucky it's the short-term break," Lin remarked to Jenn as both girls were
clearing up their lockers.
"Yup,
can’t wait to get out of my uniform," Jenn remarked.
"Hate the
blouse?"
"The whole
darn thing. Especially the skirt," Jenn pointed. "I'm jeans kind of
girl not skirts that give boys a free peep show. I...Are we going to find a
meeting place for our detective group?"
The two
students met up with Chelle and they scouted the town for an appropriate venue.
They finally narrowed their choices to an old farmhouse along the train tracks
or a parked mobile home whose owner was willing to rent it out.
"Still
tough choices," Chelle remarked as they stopped for some food and drink.
"The farmhouse stinks to high heaven and we'll be spending more time cleaning
it than meeting."
"Well the
caravan owner is charging like £100 pounds per day just to be there," Lin
complained. "Hey don’t me; just because I have wealthy family doesn't mean
I can immediately fund rental."
Just then, a
fat man in a suit and tie approached the trio. "Michelle Summers, Lin
Chan, Jennifer Thompson?" Lin corrected her name. "Alexander Peters,
Regulation team, Croonford town council." The girl's stared at his ID card
before letting him continue. "We thank you for uncovering the corruption
in the latest QuizzWhizz competition. After some debate, the town council
decided to award three of you £100 each."
The girls were
super elated. "That's still not enough for a long-term stay at that
caravan, but it's a start," Jenn mused. After banking her cheque, Chelle
returned home to hear her mother discussing about a short family holiday.
"We're going to Marksville," her mother declared. "There's a
great furniture sale there and a resort perfect for rest and recreation. Plus,
there's a street festival there."
"Ooh, love
a festival," Kate clapped her hands.
"Thanks
honey," Arthur Summers kissed his wife. Just then, his mobile buzzed.
After checking it, he regrettably said, "sorry, can't make it after all.
Work calls."
"Oh dear,
and I booked the resort rooms and other tickets in your name," his wife
remarked.
In a corner,
Chelle was on a chat with Lin and Jenn. "Hey girls, dad can't make it to
our family holiday to Marksville. Either of you free to join us?"
"I've
drama club practise, sorry," typed Jenn.
"Marksville.
What so special there?" Asked Lin.
Michelle
repeated what her mum described and after some debate, Lin decided to join the
Summers family on their trip. "Have fun you two. I'll try to handle the
meeting place while you're away."
Marksville
After hours on
a train journey, all of them made it to Marksville. While Mrs Summers and Kate
unpacked and rest, Chelle and Lin explored the town. It was much smaller than
Croonford and much quieter in the evening. "Almost like a ghost
town."
"Yeah.
Say, here's something I made before the trip," she held out something
really minute. "This is an identification device, marking each of us up to
a range of one kilometre. It can be fitted to any clothing or items. What do
you want yours attached to?"
Chelle looked
at the device and decided on her watch. "Alright, so we can track each
other on our phone - I'll show you in a minute - or a function I'm making for
digital watches."
"And where
do you place your locator?" When Lin revealed the location, Chelle
laughed. "You really want to know?”
The next day,
the Summers and Lin toured the resort, enjoying the various indoor games sports
and leisure areas. Lin and Chelle, having enjoyed enough of the resort, got Mrs
Summers permission again to tour the town. "It’s not only a ghost town in
the evening, but a purely white town. There's not single coloured person beside
well myself here."
"Well you
have me," Chelle reassured her. Just then a group call came in from Jenn.
"Well,
besides the resort being a resort and Lin finding the whole place void diversity,
nothing much," Chelle informed the shortest member of the team.
"I'm
getting somewhere with Mr Morden, the caravan owner. He'll take half of our
prize money and allow us in the caravan but we have to help out with his garden
and household. Or he'll take all of our money and let us in. But the stay is
only for six months."
"I don't
want to lose my prize money and we probably be taking up most of my time,"
Lin responded and Chelle agreed. The three girls discuss the options but still
could not arrive at a final decision. Lin then proceeded brief Jenn on how to
trace both herself and Chelle by forwarding a special app to her mobile.
"Once we're back, I'll give you the same device I made."
Suddenly, music
blared across the town. "Hey, the street festival is starting. We’ll
discuss the meeting place when we're back," Chelle ended the call. Mrs
Summers and Kate joined them and the first few floats passed by. The first few
floats were the generic kind then came one with girls that looked Indian and were
wearing saris.
"Hey look,
Lin, there are some non-white people after all!" Chelle poked her friend.
"Uh, if
you closer, they dress like Indians, but underneath they are Caucasian,"
her Chinese friend countered and Chelle's eyes fluttered in resignation. The MC
for the whole parade suddenly announced, "And everyone's favourite float,
the Flaming Angels!" The crowd roared as a multi-coloured float with a
complex design and fire sprouting out of random angles appeared. On the float,
nearly a dozen women danced around the sprays of fire, wearing costumes that
made them look like angels. They moved in such random patterns and as the
flames sprouted, each performer almost appeared to move through the fire,
causing the audience to gasp and then clap.
"That's so
cool!" Chelle's younger sister exclaimed. "I wish that happened
during dance class." As her mother gave her a lecture on the danger, Lin
edged forward, staring at the float. "Why, think that's really
spectacular?" Chelle asked sarcastically.
"Look at
the eyes of those performers," Lin pointed.
"What's so
special? They just can move past fire."
"No, no,
look again, their eyes. They're drugged or something. And they aren't moving
randomly; they're moving their limbs in robotic fashion."
Chelle was
doubtful of Lin's claim but squinted her eyes and saw a red blur that was
common in all the eyes of the girls on the Flaming Angels float. She was about
to respond when the autumn rain came and the MC for the festival announced the
floats would resume once the rain stopped.
"Come on,
let's return to the hotel," Mrs Summers motioned to the children.
"Um, Mrs
Summers, we would like head closer to take picture of the floats," Lin
lied.
"Ok, you
have your raincoats. But be back here by four or when I text you two."
"Ok, it's
a case," Chelle remarked, tightening her raincoat. "But surely not in
that kind of clothing?" Lin was wearing a knee-length skirt, 40 denier
dark blue tights while Chelle was in a generic pair of jeans.
"It's not
like I'm totally immobilised. Come on." Both young sleuths headed towards
where the famous float was parked. A huge tarpaulin now covered the float but
it appeared to be sealed tight. The two girls scouted around and finally found
an opening. "Ready?"
"You know,
if we're caught, it could be embarrassing," Chelle remarked.
"Hey, it's
still a mystery. Here's an extra of that penknife disguised as a as a
foundation powder kit, it may turn out useful, Lin replied. "And activate
that recording device I fixed to your phone cover."
Once they
crawled into the 'tent', they were shocked at the sight. The performers from
the float and other girls were seated cross-legged on the ground. There was a
red glow common in all the girls' eyes and their mouths hardly moving.
"Hi,
hello, I'm Michelle. You are?" Michelle asked the nearest girl. Lin
introduced her full name to another girl waving her hands close to the girl's
eyes. After several attempts, both of them concluded the performers were indeed
drugged.
"So how
the hell can they perform on that float with all that fire?" Chelle asked.
"Don't
know. Say, they don't look British; they look Eastern European," Lin
remarked. Before Chelle could continue, loud voices boomed from behind them.
The girls frantically looked around and there was only a heap of boxes.
However, they couldn't reach them in time before a lady with long brown hair,
another taller black hair lady and a muscular tattooed guy entered.
"Well,
what do we have here? Children snooping around?"
"We…we are
just fans of your float and wanted to congratulate your performers,"
Chelle quickly blurted out an excuse.
"Yeah,
yeah, I heard better lies than that lassie," the lady smirked, gesturing
to her colleagues who grabbed both girls. Before they could shout, gloved hands
were clamped down over their jaws. To both Chelle and Lin's shock, the lady
rapidly advanced and jammed a needle into both their necks, and within seconds
both young sleuths slumped down.
Strangely
enough, both girls could still see what was happening and hear, although the
voices appeared much muted than before. Neither of them could feel anything
across their skin, talk or move their limbs one bit. "That was fast as
usual. Kel, go check outside for any more of these vermin. Regina, help me get
these two dressed."
Dressed?!
Michelle screamed in her mind as the lady toward over her. Helpless, her
raincoat, then her jumper, then her shirt and jeans were removed, exposing her
white bra and beige knickers. "Aw, that one has cuter undies," the
evil captor purred, pointing at Lin's bigger black bra and polka dot pink
knickers.
The lady dug
into one of the crates and fished out two costumes that were exactly what
performers wore. Within minutes, both Michelle and Lin Ling were dressed up
like the Flaming Angels, with Michelle suit appearing tight on her. "Yup,
it doesn't look right. Besides, the Chinese one looks the part. Maybe I'll find
my next shipment from that country." I'm half Malaysian, half Hong Kong,
you witch, Lin yelled internally. "Better secure this one. I'll train
Eastern bigger tits girl with the other potion and the performance will
rock."
Chelle could
only wail silently as Lin was carried away in a fireman's lift. The other
ladies hustled the rest of the seated performers out, with Chelle still
pondering how they had stunned her. That co-captor Regina returned and armed
with a long tube of plastic. Still with most senses disabled, Chelle could only
whine internally as cloth was wound around her jaw. Then plastic wrap was wound
around her arms, pinning her arms tightly against her sides. More plastic wrap
secured her legs together. "That and the drug should hold you,"
Regina smirked, rolling the still stunned sleuth across the ground.
Back in the
hotel, Mrs Summers face turned from a from to a frantic mode as she dialled
both her daughter's and Lin's mobile phone numbers but continuously received a
dial tone or a 'please leave a message after tone' after several tries. Before
Kate could speak up, her mother declared, "I'm going out to look for your
sister and her friend. Stay here and don't go out ok?"
"But mum,
the parade will be re-starting..."
"I know.
But I want you to stay here ok? Watch TV, maybe it will show up on the
TV." With a quick kiss on Kate's forehead, she grabbed her brolly and
dashed out.
Croonford
After a boring
drama club, Jenn dialled her fellow sleuths’ mobiles as well, aiming to discuss
the acquiring of the headquarters. After several engaged calls she also frowned
as she made her way home. She then remembered the name of the hotel Michelle
mentioned and after searching on her mobile, she called the front desk,
pretending she was a family member.
"Hi, this
is Jennifer Thompson is Michelle Summers there?" She asked, after being
connected.
"Hi, this
is Kate Summers. my sister isn't here." After a brief conversation, Jenn
concluded the call. So Chelle and Lin weren't in their hotel room and not
answering their mobiles. Jenn pondered about that as she changed to comfortable
clothes back home. "Mum, Dad, I'm going out to meet some school friends.
Won't be too late."
"Well, be
back by dinner time," Her father called but she had already scooted to
catch the train to Marksville.
The reason
for the engaged calls naturally was the fact the evil lady had shut both
Chelle's and Lin's phones off. Pocketing them, she donned her own costume and
roughly shoved the further-drugged Lin in line with the rest of the performers.
"One, step, turn. Two, step turn," she barked. With all the girls
heavily drugged, they did not speak in return or retaliate. Instead, they
followed their 'owner's' orders, practicing movements on the ground. She had no
idea her voice was being recorded by the special device within both the
sleuth’s phone covers.
Mrs Maggie
Summers was frantic. Where was her daughter and her friend? She finally reached
the spot where she told the children to meet up then recalled Lin's last
statement. It wasn't long before she spotted the tarpaulin covering the Flaming
Angels float. "Hello, have you seen two young, pre-teen girls?" She
asked the tattooed man, whom she assumed was a guard. "One's about 5'2
with dark brown hair, the other's about 5'3, Chinese, black hair."
"Sorry no,
and it's still raining, why would kids be around?" The 'guard', Kel
answered. After more talk, Maggie Summers gave him her phone number and left,
still frantic over the missing children.
"Hey,"
He entered the tent and call his colleague Regina. "I think the girl's mum
is searching for her," he pointed at the quite mummified, and still
stunned Michelle.
"Parade's
re-starting soon," their boss appeared. "Secure her in one of the
shipment boxes. She could still be useful." Following that order, Kel and
Regina lifted the wrapped school girl, folded her into a bent foetal position
and sealed her in a large box. "Do ya think she can breathe?" Regina
wondered.
"The other
girls came in such containers; of course, she can. Let's help move da
float," her partner snorted.
What the heck
am I doing here, Jenn wondered as she exited Marksville's train station. Dad's
going to give me hell if I return home late, she thought. As she opened her
phone to try her friend's again, she noted the special app Lin installed in her
mobile. Activating it, she didn't find a strong signal from Lin's device, but
Chelle's location was strong. The app didn't exactly provide directions, but
the signal grew stronger after each block and Jenn heard the app beep extremely
loudly.
In front of her
was the tarpaulin but it was being lifted up as the float was wheeled out. Jenn
snuck behind a building and checked the app. It now showed Michelle's signal
was really close by and Lin's signal was stronger but moving. Peering around,
Jenn pulled her dark-coloured coat cover her head and half-walked, half-crawled
towards the direction of Chelle's signal--she had turned off the sound on her
mobile. Inside the tent were just boxes but Jenn also noticed the girl's jeans,
shirt, jumper and raincoat scattered at a side.
What the?! She
thought and looking at her phone, the signal was coming from one of the boxes
in the middle. With all her strength, she managed to lift the top box and then
pry open the box. "Oh my gosh, Chelle?!" She cried, finding her
fellow sleuth wrapped up in the plastic and gagged. "Hold on," she
lowered her voice, lest someone her and slowly lifted her friend out.
"Chelle?
Michelle? It's me, Jenn, Jennifer," Jenn whispered then shook Michelle
violently. "Chelle?"
Michelle's eyes
suddenly fluttered, blinked then nodded. "Chelle, hold on," Jenn
called, working at the tight knots of the cloth gag. After several sweaty
minutes, the cloth gave way. "Michelle? Chelle, can you hear me?" But
all Michelle could do was blink her eyes.
"Hold on,
I'll get the plastic off," Jenn called. Michelle's eyes fluttered then her
head nodded violently. "Are you in shock…what?" Jenn suddenly turned
and followed her friend's eyes back towards her discarded clothes. Picking up
the jeans, the penknife-foundation kit immediately fell out. Jenn opened it and
used the blade to cut away the coils of plastic wrap.
"Michelle,
Chelle..." Jenn shook her friend's body once again.
"Ah...Yow...Jenn?"
Michelle shouted her words then shrieked as her crotch turned damp.
"Yes, it's
me," Jenn cried, elated. "Are you able to move?" Michelle nodded
then blurted out rapidly. "Lin, Lin Ling! She's in trouble!"
"Yeah,
Shh, don't worry, I've got the app, I can trace her." Gathering Chelle's
clothes, Jenn helped Chelle out. The rain had stopped and the sound of the
street carnival had returned. With one arm supporting the still-partly drugged
Chelle, Jenn followed the direction of Lin's signal on her phone. As suspected,
Lin was on the Flaming Angels float, and with the other performers, was moving
in the choreograph sequences formed by the evil lady.
"Introducing
the latest Angel, Esther Wong!" The MC called.
"Hey, no!
That's my friend Lin Ling!" Jenn cried as she and the still costumed-dressed
Chelle moved towards the front.
"Children,
don't stop the festival please," a policewoman approached them with both
arms stretched out. "And," she looked at Michelle. "Aren't you
one of the performers on that float?"
"Constable,
she's not a performer. She was held against her will in a box. And it's my
friend also held against her will on that float!" Jenn protested.
"Yeah,
yeah, I've heard better stories. Move back please, you're disturbing the
festival and endangering yourself," the police officer said, disbelieving.
"Officer..."
Jenn cried.
"Hey you,
how you get out?" Jenn turned to see a brown-haired lady with a mask over
her eyes and dark-haired lady. "Get them!" But Jenn moved faster,
helping Chelle through the crowds. Both girls were still in the front of the
crowds that had returned to see the floats. As they were running, Jenn noticed
the float passing by with Lin moving past the sprouting flames.
"Lin! Lin
Ling!" She shrieked but all Lin did was moved in the quickly-taught dance
sequence. Her eyes glowed, indicating she was heavily-drugged.
"Gotcha!"
Jenn heard and she was immediately grabbed from behind. "Naughty girl,
escaping eh?" The masked lady cried. Jenn kicked wildly at the hands
holding her when suddenly she remembered how she freed Chelle.
"Yikes!" Regina yelled as the blade of the penknife was slashed
against her arm.
"What's
going on here?" The same policewoman ran up.
"Officer,
this child is attacking my friend and me with a penknife," the masked lady
cried.
"No..."
Michelle blurted. "No...my friend..." Jenn saw that both of them had
lost it. As she stood straighter up, her arm bumped into a glass. It was the
panel of a fire hose. Smashing it, Jenn yanked the hose out and without
thinking, sprayed the passing float. The flames stopped spurting but more
surprisingly, the performers, now soaked, suddenly rushed down from the float
and started yelling in a European language. Lin also rushed down straight into
her two friends.
Hours
later
"We've
been hunting for this lady for a while, Anna Radrik. As you discovered, she's
been smuggling Eastern European ladies into the UK with the promise of jobs and
working visa. We did highly suspect her using the girls as part of a troupe but
never thought she would drug them with mind-controlling drugs. Thanks to your
recording, we have strong evidence for a case again Anna and her
colleagues," the senior detective noted to the girls. Michelle and Lin
Ling were in the local hospital. Both were still under inspection to clear them
of any remains of the drugs.
"Wow,"
was Lin's comment. "Without Jenn's help, I would be in a robotic trace,
dancing through flames."
"As they
say, that's what friend are for." Suddenly her phone buzzed rapidly.
"Uh, Detective, can we clear this up later?"
Croonford
Thompson Residence
"Daddy,
please, nothing dangerous happen," Jenn pleaded to her stern father.
"I don't
care, you broke the rules, to your room young lady!"
The End
Michelle,
Lin Ling and Jennifer will return in To Madam with Love.
Return to the Contributions index